FeedbackImprovementsFor my second draft, I will need to shoot more clips to incorporate into the trailer. These clips are extra ones that have been incorporated in my planning but weren't included in the first draft. The extra shots will also develop the trailer, providing more hints of the developing plot as well as help make it seem more fragmented - to make it resemble a trailer more.
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Improvements to makeNeed to film specific shots to add to the trailer:
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